Feedback on a children's story I wrote?

Its extremely repetitive, even for a children's book. There are plenty of counting books for kids out there that take this format already. Yours is not unique enough that it stands out. And there's pretty much NO story whatsoever. A penguin goes to Hawaii. Fantastic, but so what? After all the buildup in the beginning, I was expecting more. This was quite disappointing. Sorry, but I just didn't think it was good at all